Sunday, January 3, 2010

Skinhorse Poetry: "The Path to Love"

Should love's limits
be defined
to exacting perimeters
so cautiously placed
by those who
fear
to search deeper,
reach farther,
risk more,
so that their hearts
might hurt less
in their so-called quest?

And in the discovery
of new love,
must there be
edges marked
and barriers raised
to show
only
the trodden path
where love's carefully
sowed garden ends
and unseen wildflowers
begin?

What shall it be then?
To keep the
respectful distance
and leave to imagination
where limits,
if there be any,
may lie?

Or defy
definitions
of love's limitations,
and challenge the distance--
believing,
and understanding also,
that only in the
stepping over of edges
and sharing of that which is
untrodden
does the truer path
to love
set in?

- Jacqueline J. Hancock

6 comments:

Rogers Family said...

Wow!! That was so awesome. I'm totally jealous that you can write like that. What a wonderful gift you have been given. I loved it!

Sara H said...

That's really good, Jacki! I wonder if you could get it published somewhere.

the Marvelous Mrs. M said...

I'll have to think on that for a while- very deep :)

T.B.W. said...

Wow that hits home.

Jill said...

I like your poetry, keep it up.

Clarisa said...

this is a very different side of you than i read on fb or even remember from days of past, yet i am not surprised at all, it is so rightly you. thank you very the true and sincere response about fostering kids. sometimes we want to help so desparatly but you are right about setting up boundries and remembering first comes our family's safety in all aspects. thank you again.